WritingIn the deadly chaos of the First World War, one horse witnesses the reality of battle from both sides of the trenches. Bombarded by artillery, with bullets knocking riders from his back, Joey tells a powerful story of the truest friendships surviving in terrible times. One horse has seen the best and the worst of humanity. The power of war and the beauty of peace. This is his story.
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Diary Entries
One of the original Australian Imperial Force (AIF) units that landed on Gallipoli was the 16th Battalion. Signaller Ellis Silas told a story of the battalion at Anzac through his diary and artworks, in a book published in 1916.
Using your sensory web about 'Life in the Trenches' , and inspiration from the diary entries below, create your own diary entry from the perspective of a WW1 soldier.
Using your sensory web about 'Life in the Trenches' , and inspiration from the diary entries below, create your own diary entry from the perspective of a WW1 soldier.
Write a descriptive Paragraph
Write a descriptive paragraph describing your horse.
Task
Here is a basic sentence to start with: The horse ran through the battlefield.
See if you can uplevel the subject, predicate and punctuation. You might be able to use multi-sensory clues from your sensory web, and ideas from your horse character profile.
See if you can uplevel the subject, predicate and punctuation. You might be able to use multi-sensory clues from your sensory web, and ideas from your horse character profile.
Example
The brave horse galloped through the frantic battlefield, his hooves pounding like distant drums as the sharp scent of smoke filled the air. Metal fragments whizzed past like angry wasps, but he courageously pushed on.
Extension
Write a creative sentence or paragraph using some of these key words from Chapter 1 in War Horse.
- Wrenched
- Exhaustion
- Barney
- Intrigued
- Hubbub
- Stamina
- Whisked
- Haggling
- Lunge