This week you are going to write a personal recount about the swimming carnival. Your recount should share the details of your experiences on the day. Think of the different races you participated in or the people in your team you cheered for.
Hint: Remember to write in chronological order, (the order in which the events happened). How can you uplevel your writing? Think about some good WOW words you could use in the big write and share them as a comment on this post.
13 Comments
Rain.D
21/2/2017 09:48:33 am
Extatic
Crystal hogan
21/2/2017 09:49:00 am
I heard the ROAR of the crowd as mister p rocketed throygh the water.
Nicholas M
21/2/2017 09:50:17 am
My wow word is rocketing.
Isabel
21/2/2017 09:50:56 am
Boosted,
Lionell.N
21/2/2017 09:51:05 am
i was Tremendous
Emily
21/2/2017 09:51:18 am
tremendosly
amity
21/2/2017 09:51:59 am
tremendes
elton
21/2/2017 09:52:14 am
When I was zooming through the water in freesyle with no goggles the water is blinding and the crowd was roaring for dunlop
Whyll
21/2/2017 09:52:24 am
fabolous
Lionell.N
21/2/2017 09:52:46 am
it was tremendous
Christian
21/2/2017 09:52:54 am
outstanding
Jorja Lewko
21/2/2017 09:53:17 am
victorious champion
Caleb S
21/2/2017 10:04:57 am
this is fantastic Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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